floriaan60
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 Posté le: Dim Mar 21, 2010 3:46 pm Sujet du message: Aide à la correction de mes fautes |
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Bonjour,
j'ai écrit un texte en anglais et j'aimerai savoir si vous pouvez me dire ce que vous en pensé ainsi que me dire les fautes que j'ai pu faire.
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I go to present you my communication project that i have realized with Dorian.
We have realized an initiation at the moring at the dojo of the Vallin hall.
The moring is a dance of fight which comes from the reunion island and which allies dance, music, fight and acrobatics during a confrontation between two opponents. It was practised by the African slaves.
So, our idea was to welcome the participants in the dojo of the hall Vallin, to present them our license, then to introduce them to this sport.
So, once the welcomed participants and held by sport on the tatami, we explained them our project and the goal of the training ****, then we began the initiation in her even.
During the initiation, the participants have learnt the rites of the moring, its dance, the acrobatics then the fight, on the bottom of the music native of the Réunion and on which the slaves danced to find their culture.
To promote our event, we realized a website as well as a poster and flyers that we posted(showed) and distributed on all the campus.
To finish, we are satisfied of the result of our initiation because we counted about twenty persons present. Furthermore, all the participants were satisfied of the evening which they had just crossed.
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Je vous remercie d'avance !!! |
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