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As a student in a 2 year course to become a sales and technical representative, I had to carry out a fourteen week work placement in a company called Meiser located in Béthune Avenue La Ferme du Roy.

My company is an international company: France, Germany.
Meiser of Béthune employs thirty-five employees specialized in gratings.

My tutor was Mister Depoix, a sales manager for the south of france.

My work consisted in developing protective device for trees
I also had to answer the telephone, to sort out the files and create new ones. The new target so are to list in a picture under size World to be then to canvass and can be future of prospective customer.

My period of training was very enriching, so on the professional level as on the personal plan.