correction anglais

[thailande]

Bonjour , pouvez vous m'aider s'il vous plaît , je voudrais savoir si mes phrases sont correctes .
ça n'a rien de professionnel mais je tiens a garder le vouvoiement et le sens des phrases

I'm not asking any answer in return, I know that you're very busy, I'm with your for the rest, you have all my love, I will be always faithful to you.

I have much admiration for you, I you following debut since .

Merci pour les réponses

[jeremy]

Bonjour j'ai réalisé une présentation de mon stage de BTS en anglais pour mon oral et j'aimerais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait jeter un petit coup d'oeil dessus. Merci d'avance!

I realized my BTS file in the company Oggi Pasta.This company is a comercial unity that one call a "pasta" bar. It is situated in Strasbourg in the commercial center " Place des Halles".
The activites wich were asked me or wich i realized during my work experience were very different because we can define my role in the company as veratile. So within the commercial team i could take care of the preparation of the commands in cooking as the service for the customers in cashdesk.
Within the framework of my file i also have of bendover needs and weaknesses of the company to realize missions of management as the realization of the schedule or still the missions of customers relations as the modifying of the store or the putting on sale of new product.
For these missions my activites were the implementation of the operations and the stuides of satisfactions of the customers.
The realization of this file and more generally my work experiences realized during my BTS training allowed me to interfere me in the working life and to understand all the difficulties of the management of a commercial unity and an implementation of a project.