Help !

[Mikoo57]

J'ai une rédaction d'Anglais à faire pour demain, je l'ai faite mais j'aimerais qu'on m'aide à corriger les fautes, qui je pense sont très nombreuses, mon Anglais étant assez mauvais.
Merci d'avance.

[quote]Dear Parents,

I write you a letter to have news about you. I wish you were goog ! Soon, it's Christmas, I'm pressed to see you. Can we'll go to Calcutta ? I'd like to be with grandma and all the family. Please !
For my part, all is good, today is the end of my first semester at Langford and I'm so happy : i received my grades. I'm proud, but I had to work harder to maintain my grades, the academic level is higher than the indian. And a lot of changes appear in my life : I have to wear a jacket in class and call teachers " masters ". I even have to go to the church on Sundays.
But, I did all I could to adapt to the new situation : I was the only Indian student and I'm yet (people assume I was born in India, and compliment my accent !).
Now, I practice swimming competitively and I've a lot of friends : I call them by their last name particurlarly John , with who i share my room. His parents live in London , like me he's arrived for sophomore year, and like me he was without friends . We were all the time together : in classes, to lunch ... John has a lot of qualities : honesty, generosity, humor. He's sociable, it's thank to him if today I have my other friends.
Dad, you had reason, Langford is the best school where I'm gone. In this campus, I'm sure : I'll graduates. Thank you so much for this !

Amit.

PS : Dad, Do your research progressing ? I know it's very important for you, your work it's your life. Mom, I don't miss you too ? You kave to know I'm very good here, I eat well.[/quote]

[bryanb]

I wish you were goog : I hope you're doing fine
I'm pressed to see you : I hope to see you soon
Can we'll go to Calcutta ?: can we go to Calcutta sometime?
For my part : as for me
And a lot of changes appear in my life: and there have been a lot of changes in my life
with who i share: with whom i share
it's thank to : it's thanks to
Dad, you had reason -- Dad, you were right
best school where I'm gone.: best school where I've ever been
graduates: graduate
Do your research progressing: Are you making any progress with your research
your work it's your life: your work is your life
I don't miss you too ? : don't you miss me too?
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