lettre de motivation

[raptor079]

Bonjour, j'aimerais avoir vos avis sur une lettre de motivation que j'ai rédigé dans le but de réaliser un stage en Angleterre entre juin et septembre de cette année !

Merci beaucoup de vos réponse, et n'hésitez surtout pas à critiquer !

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Ref: request for a work placement in the computer engineering area



Dear Sir or Madam,

I take the liberty to contact you because your establishment holds my attention. According to my student course, I would like to carry out an internship in the computer sector for a three-month work experience period between June and September 2010.

I am currently student in my fourth year of engineering school in electronics and computer sciences at the ESEO in Angers. I am preparing the Embedded Systems and Automation field of specialisation and I am particularly interested by the data processing development sector.

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Thanks to my formation, I have already a know-how and solicit you to put it into practice within your company by learning what can be the reality of working life and thus acquire a sound experiment. Serious, motivated and effective, I would like to make of this internship abroad a chance to improve my English speaking but also an occasion to validate my professional project.

I am available for an interview and I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss with you in order to show my motivation. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,