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popoopaline
Inscrit le: 14 Mar 2010 Messages: 3
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Posté le: Lun Oct 11, 2010 9:03 pm Sujet du message: Petite correction texte anglais .. |
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He got someone to me that he had no family and that he was not the only one. A feeling of revolt suddenly take over me. I felt guilty, I learnt to read and to write to children as old as him, some meters from there where he lived and I didn't nothing. I had put him up at home during a few months, I was nourishing to him, I taught him English, as if he was my own child.
We had difficulty having a child with Steve, he understood even better my initiative, and helped me in it. A few months later, after careful consideration , I decided to build a structure for immigrant children of China.It was a nursery but free it was not done in this timeperiod.
Thanks to donations of the population of San Francisco, I was able to improve the life of them, and to assure them, I hope it, a great future. You can see on this picture, the facade of the school. I'd love so much that you are with me to help these children. You would become attached to them straightaway, they are so much charming. Join me fast.
SVP, dites moi si mon texte comporte des fautes.. |
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bryanb
Inscrit le: 22 Sep 2010 Messages: 18
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Posté le: Mer Oct 13, 2010 3:44 pm Sujet du message: |
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| Citation: | He got someone to me that he had no family and that he was not the only one. A feeling of revolt suddenly take over me. I felt guilty, I learnt to read and to write to children as old as him, some meters from there where he lived and I didn't nothing. I had put him up at home during a few months, I was nourishing to him, I taught him English, as if he was my own child.
We had difficulty having a child with Steve, he understood even better my initiative, and helped me in it. A few months later, after careful consideration , I decided to build a structure for immigrant children of China.It was a nursery but free it was not done in this timeperiod.
Thanks to donations of the population of San Francisco, I was able to improve the life of them, and to assure them, I hope it, a great future. You can see on this picture, the facade of the school. I'd love so much that you are with me to help these children. You would become attached to them straightaway, they are so much charming. Join me fast. |
| Citation: | | He got someone to me that he had no family and that he was not the only one |
He seemed to me like someone who had no family and...
| Citation: | | suddenly take over me |
suddenly took over me
| Citation: | | I didn't nothing |
I didn't know anything
| Citation: | | I was nourishing to him |
I fed him
| Citation: | | he understood even better my initiative |
he understood my initiative better
à suivre...
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