Relecture très courte rédaction en anglais

[jupaulus]

Bonjour à tous.

Dans le cadre d'un de mes cours, je dois réaliser une courte rédaction sur les vêtements.
Pour nous y aider, nous devons répondre à quelques questions:
- do you dress always the same or do you wear different clothes on different occasions?
- do you think clothes say something about a person?
- what are your favorite clothes?
- how often do you buy clothes?

Je vous serais extrêmement reconnaissant si vous acceptiez de relire et de corriger les fautes d'orthographe (j'espère qu'il n'y en a pas beaucoup) et de grammaire.
Merci d'avance

"In winter, I usually wear blue jeans, a T-shirt, a pullover and, only when it's very cold outside, a coat. Indeed, I'm not sensitive to cold so I don't like a hot coat! Sometimes, I wear a dress shirt but it's rather unusual.
In summer, I like wear shorts only, a T-shirt and thongs. About thongs, I hate when someone is wearing some thongs with socks! It's absolutely awful!

I'm doing a lot of sports at the University and in a sports association; in this case, I also wear shorts and a T-shirt whatever the weather!

Clothes don't make the man! Indeed, if you think that you know the person only by his clothes, it's a lack of open-mindedness! For example, some women can like to wear sexy clothes but they aren't automatically women of easy virtue... Unfortunately, everyone doesn't agree with me.

I wait for the sales in January and July to buy some clothes. They are cheaper than usually and as I just have a student job, I don't have a lot of money to spend on clothes!

During the sales, I try to go to the outlet center like Maasmachelen because prices are lower than they are in other shops. It's easier to make some good bargains!"

[Lolo_123456789]

Bonjour,

Je verrais une erreur ici :
In summer, I like wearing shorts only
ou bien
In summer, I wear shorts only

[sali27]

"In winter, I usually wear blue jeans, a T-shirt, and a pullover When it's very cold outside, a coat. Indeed, I'm not sensitive to cold so I don't like a warm coat! Sometimes, I wear a dress shirt but it's rare
In the summer, I only like wearing shorts , a T-shirt and thongs. About thongs, I hate when someone is wearing ongs with socks! It's absolutely awful! Wink

I'm practise a lot of sports at the University and in the sports association; in this case, I also wear shorts and a T-shirt whatever the weather!

Clothes don't make the man! Indeed, if you think that you know the person only by his clothes, it's a lack of open-mindedness! For example, some women like to wear sexy clothes but they aren't automatically women of easy virtue... Unfortunately, everyone doesn't agree with me.

I wait for the sales in January and July to buy some clothes. They are cheaper than usually and as I only have a students job, I don't have a lot of money to spend on clothes!

During the sales, I try to go to the outlet center like Maasmachelen because prices are lower than they are in other shops. It's easier to make some good bargains!"