traduction d'un texte avec terme technique web

[zalteco]

Bonjour

J'ai réalisé la traduction d'une page de mon site :
Ici : http://www.creasiteweb.fr/translate.html

Pouvez vous me dire ce que vous en pensez ? Et m'aider a mieux le traduire ?
Certaines tournures de phrases me laissent songeur

Comprenez vous le texte (fond et forme) ?
merci

[londoners]

A website is static WHEN its MAIN purpose is to present the company IDENTITY : news AND PRODUCTS and provide a single contact with the user. This information is NOT often updated and mainly SHOWS image of the company's business ACTIVITIES giving the user a general idea about what IT IS ALL ABOUT
In contrast, WITH a dynamic website, you will be able to LINK with a LARGE RANGE of clients at once through your news and blogs. You will be able, AS WELL, to provide a sales service online.

[zalteco]

thanks for your help.

Toute la difficulté de la traduction étant de ne pas traduire mot à mot, sans trop s'éloigner du texte d'origine avec les termes techniques.

Encore merci de la part de ceux qui lisent la langue de Shakespeare et qui ne s'écorcheront pas les yeux !

[sali27]

Encore un petit corretion

A website is static WHEN its MAIN purpose is to present the company's IDENTITY : news AND PRODUCTS and provide a single contact with the user. This information is NOT often updated and mainly SHOWS an image of the company's business ACTIVITIES giving the user a general idea about what IT IS ALL ABOUT
In contrast, WITH a dynamic website, you will be able to LINK with a LARGE RANGE of clients at once through your news and blogs. You will also be able to provide a sales service online.

[londoners]